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Description
Name: Adeline molucanna
Age: 16
Gender: Female.
Species: archeops
Hometown: solaceon town
Birthdate: June 27
Nature: rash
Personality: .Hyper and energetic, Adeline is ALWAYS looking for a good time. Unfortunately, she hardly ever thinks things through, often leading to some kind of trouble, physical injury or otherwise. Really though, the only reason she wouldn't be excited usually is because she is exhausted or sad (or concetrating, that does happen sometimes).
She also loves meeting new people sometimes, as long as they don't seem like fakes. That is, a fake being someone who's all nice and stuff but really it's just an act, (yes, she can sort of sense that) but,having had little proper social interaction prior to running away, She also knows next to nothing about social interaction and stuff. She also doesn't care how you act as long as you,re not being fake. You could be a total jerk and as long as you don't give off the feeling of being a fake (or you do, depending on the situation). She'll just stand there smiling or otherwise doing whatever. Really she just can't stand fakes, having had to be around them all the time for a long time (she even had to live with a couple back then)
Beyond that, however, Adeline is rather oblivious at times to others. It's so bad, that someone could be talking about something REALLY important and she would be ignoring them the whole time. She wouldn't even notice it either she'd just be so engrossed in what she's doing then and there. then like the almost opposite is sometimes true, she'd be talking about something almost constantly and the other guy could care less. if he tried getting away and she'd just follow him. she just THAT focused on what she's talking about. although, sometimes it's just short statements followed long pauses with her staring at you the whole time. fortunately she's easily distracted by small things like bugs and other things.
Moveset: shadow claw, rock smash, iron tail, crunch
History:
Adeline's parents were a carracosta named Brannor and an archeops named Charolette. Not as in love with each other as they are with their social standing and publicity, they've based their entire relationship on just that. Their social clique thought they looked cute together,so they got married. that doesn't mean they didn't love each other, though, but their interest was more into the attention they got BY they're relationship.
To them, the most damaging thing to their careers, would be a child.
But oftentimes one thing will lead to another and Adeline was the result
Once Adeline came, their first reaction was to leave her where she would garner the least attention. Charolette, of course, thought immedietely of her father. Since the old archeops was terrified of both the government and social media, he seemed like the perfect low profile creature to send their new daughter to. With just a little fudging behind their motives, the old man was more then happy to care for his new grandaughter.
And so, Adeline grew up, not in a crowded city, but a quiet, secluded farmland with her stern yet kind grandfather, Adair, and the young, friendly, and diligent farmhand, Adrian.
Then one day, grandpa got sick.
At first, it didn't seem all all that bad, and Adair would insist that all he needed was some rest. but, sometimes things will escalate fast and by the time things got serious it was already too late.
Immediately afterwards, Adrian sent a letter to Adelines' parents telling them what happened and asking them to help in anyway they could. He told them about how much harder it'd be taking care of both her AND the farm. Now that Adair was gone he just wasn't sure he would be able handle it all.
Her parents scoffed at the idea. To them, Adeline was just a mistake. A mistake they were more than happy to be rid of, and there was nothing that would convince them otherwise.
To them, Adeline was just something to be forgotten.
That is until the party. At the the party there where so many parents talking about they're children and grandchildren and some even brought them to the party. the entire subject was about children and the joy that they brought to their lives. They talked about how much richer their lives were because of their children. They felt left out of the social circle, but then the couple got an idea. Adeline was the answer.
From her first look at them, Adeline knew something was off. Their faces, the smiles, their personalities, everything about them seemed so, FAKE. Her bad feelings only worsened into dread though, when they announced their desire to bring Adeline with them to the city.
Adrian, however, was in support of her parents. No doubt the parents asking meant they wanted her. He having had to grow up without his parents, plus having to take care of the farm himself now. There was truly no doubt in his young mind that, despite the little ones protests, she should go along with her parents.
So young Adeline left, gone from a land of green and warmth. A land where she was known and loved. Instead she went to a new land. A land of grey and cold where no one cared beyond how much they were worth. From a family that loved and cared for her to one who'd only stand being near her if they were showing of how 'charitable' they were.
Upon they're arrival, Adelines' parents showed her where everything was. They told her she was to go to this elite school. It was the school were everyone that mattered sent their children (so make sure to spread some good words for them), she found that she was to attend their parties for publicity, but otherwise they wanted little to no part in her life.
Poor Adeline was miserable and alone.
Until one day...
She had snuck off again and was just hanging in the parks. She had found a tree to climb and was enjoying the peace and quiet when she heard something. Moving her head slightly, she saw a police officer, yelling at her to come down while simultaniusly running towards her. Upon her refusal to leave though, he tried getting her down himself!
Long story short, if only because of sheer refusal to give up, the two started talking and became friends. And that was how Adeline met Damian, a headstrong mightyena, who was, unfortunately, the only cop who still really cared about his job. The two ended up hanging out together.
A friend, however didn't really help with things back home. The parties were basically spent by the parents making themselves look like good people by pointing out the flaws they saw in Adaline. then they would put alot of the blame on her grandfather and Adrian, saying that it was due to bad parenting.
The irony was, while they were pointing out those flaws, their parenting was even worse. While Adrian and her grandfather weren't always able to keep an eye on her, her parents preffered not keeping an eye on her at all. While Adrian and her grandfather went out and searched for her if she wasn't seen after a few hours, her parents only started looking if it was nearing one of their parties. While Adrian and her grandfather scolded her if she did something really dangerous, her parents only scolded her when she got kicked out of school or did something to make them look bad.
The only thing that kept Adeline from running away, was Damian
He was the only one currently in her life who really cared for her. Damian told her that while home was rather miserable, being homeless was too dangerous, especially for a kid like her.
Knowing, however that with her stubbornness it would be impossible to keep her there forever, he did make sure she knew how to defend herself from creeps, and tried to teach her all the survival skills necessary to make it on her own. But until then Adeline had to sit through their parties, smile, and not make a scene.
Finally, though, Adeline decided she couldn't stand it anymore. She made a big scene at a big party they were hosting, and ran off to the park. There she told Damian that she was running away and this time, there was no stopping her.
Seeing how she stayed determined despite his urgings to wait until she was older, Damian soon realized that this time, there was no changing her mind and that all he could do was make sure she was ready before she left.
Turns out, she was
And so, Adeline left from a land of constant lights and fake people, into unknown lands, with nothing but the confidence that she could handle it.
No exact destination (though she did find an old flyer for a town known as 'I don't know') but she was confident she'd get there.
Extras:
- her favorite move is rock smash
-she uses her feet for shadow claw
- thanks to a certain "flight incident". She has some trouble with her right arm
-she learned iron tail from damian
-previous to iron tail, she knew dragonbreath
-adaline CANNOT AIM >XD
-she's 4'5
-ALSO she was going to be submitted to the PKMNC group BUT I never got the app ready and then the group closed so yeah...(just saying cause I like that she's this that old and I just find that cool and stuff)
-the words in the art app were actually from a motivational poster thing (might have been a quote but I don't remember) the full thing was "shoot for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars" (kinda feel it really fits her)
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Her personality is a little lacking. I mean, sure, Adeline is excitable and never gives up. But what else? Does she have those quirky personality traits? Put some meat into that section. Another thing is the overusage of the word like. It was a little annoying to read whenever I see that word. So do tone it down a bit. And lastly, the sentence with the capitalized words sends me some sort of bad vibe that she's a little Mary Sue personality-wise. So please remove that statement ahaha. Oh my gosh! A big block of text! Okay, it just felt like it haha. Just a suggestion, you could leave one blank space and move on to the next paragraph. Cause the history is just too tedious to read at the moment.------------
So far, this is all I can give you. Best of luck to you! Feel free to ask questions!